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Give Me Your Hand

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Give Me Your Hand

When you feel lost
And all your choices seem
To bring you down
When everything is against you

When the pressure becomes too much
And you feel like you’re about to break
When all hope has abandoned you

It’s okay to cry
It’s okay to scream
You don’t need to hide it

“Give me your hand”
Is all I say
Give me your hand
I offer you mine

Give me your hand
And I won’t let you fall
Give me your hand
I give you my soul, my love
Give me your hand
You needn’t give me anything more.
Made this one for someone really important to me.. (ada yg ngerasa? huehehe jangan ada yg gr ya XD)
"hand" here can be a metaphor for "love", "trust" and all that kind of stuff. you get the point.
Anyway, it sounds more like a pathetic corny song than poetry to me..
~enjoy
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Evelicious's avatar
nih... *giving u my hand*
ih gw suka yg bait k4!

bner si... ky lagu, tp ga pathetic corny sey...
corny apa si?